i guess it wasn't that bad...
but seriously, i think you need to practice your drawing a little bit more ^.^ especially if you're doing a tutorial. make the steps a little clearer... don't put "by changing the curve of the line, the direction the char is facing will change" yes i know you moved the line.... and i saw what you meant, but someone who is an absolute beginner, will have no idea what your talking about. put CLEARLY that if you move the line right/down/up/left, that the char will be facing right/down/up/left. as in, type it out, WHILE moving the line. music is really annoying, should be an option of no music, (besides turning off speakers) (mine happen to be hard to turn off easily) when i draw, i want to concentrate on what i'm doing, not be distracted by music, and yes def put buttons in to choose, instead of timed. people might want to study what exactly you're doing and then whoops! next part came! then they'll have to reload the whole thing to see it again! you don't always shade the whole left side of the face to give it "depth". depends on the lighting, what the char's position, etc. anyway there's so much wrong with this, i'm not going to bother pointing it out, cuz i'll be writign a book! so... bottom line, you should get a professional's tutorial (book, whatever..) and teach yourself, before you try to teach others. but you DO show promise, don't get me wrong.