Needs work...
This flash has the potential to be a 4 or 5 but only if you work on making it better. For instance is a next button really necessary? I think not! And get your spelling right! I can't stand it when in a flash stuff is spelt wrong! Does it really take so much effort to check how a word is spelt!?
The other thing that really annoyed me about this movie is the lack of sound. 80% of the time, the toon is silent. What the heck is that all about?! Just put some drum n bass in the background and it would make the whole thing less boring. I didn't even watch 'till the end of the movie 'cause I found myself falling asleep (practiclly).
As I said, this movie could easily be a 5 if you just work on it longer. If you work on it for a further 2-3 months you could probably get front page.
Well that's just my 2 cents. Where's the change?