YEA!
Sashuno said it best really i can't argue with that, this song hits hard very hard, my poor ear bud headphones i fear may have died a little...oh well. The sound choices were what really stuck most for me, and the build ups and tension you use works...a little to well hahahaha for a first song this is damn good
Thanks. I think Sashuno is a bit exaggerating, but I won't complain about such a compliment.
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If you plan on releasing an album, you should try brushing up on your mixing skills.
Way too much distortion. You're track is clipping like mad...how could you not notice? the sound spikes are all over the place, some major editiing is desperately needed. This is painful to listen to, I don't think anybody would be able to buy this album. I could probably open this up in a sound editor and the waveform would be one big block. Not good.
As a song by itself, I didn't enjoy it. To me, it has no melodical or rhythmical value. No interesting textures, just overpowering noise that hardly changed. Some of the less intense parts were okay I guess. But when you transitioned back into the heavy parts, it comes in like "boom". automate a filter through some noise or a phaser effect or something to make it smoother and build up. or maybe it was your intention to do that for this style, I don't know. I guess it does have a good industrial (sounds like it has gabber influences too....lame) concept...probably would work well in a futuristic type of flash too.
I often hear that the distortion in the way I use it is very disturbing for most people. And yes, this is my stile, mostly without melodies, the pure noise that maybe only machines like to listen. It's a pity that there is no noise section on newgrounds, I would upload all my music there. Thank you for thinking about it, I esteem that.
And I don't sell my music, this idea makes me sick :)
my ears died