Hmmm
Very very strange song, has potential but needs alot of work, the guitar sounded out of tune or using too much vibrato. And the song doesn't even loop, it just cuts out at the end, but I could see if you cleaned it up, the song being very good, keep trying
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Sounds to me as if you are still practicing to play the guitar. At the start it sounds very out of tune and a bit later (at 0:20) it seems as if you were either bending the strings or you used the tremolo arm.
Those kind of things only sound good if you are playing a little solo. But they should be avoided if you are playing riffs (like you did in this track).
Also, the end is just cut off and we are left with 5 seconds of silence. So the track doesn't loop...
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ok.
Not to bad
Despite it short length i felt this was a fairly decent if not flaws effort.
First off i felt that the rock was good ,as it felt like you fitted in a lot for 29 seconds. The rock tune seemed of high quality and effort. As it was short a good effort to fit so much in.
The probelm was it sounded a litle out of tune to loud ,and like you there is a fault with the speakers. Also it sounded like you needed more time to this as ,it felt rushed and out of tune. I think you needed to have put more time, to make the tune more in beat.
Overeall a average track that needed more time put into it.
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ya um do NOT listen with the sound up 2 loud.
Needs Work
This whole thing had a really raspy sound to it. The guitar in the beginning almost sounded like it was being played out of tune, it was kind of hard on the ear.
You have some good beginnings here for something good, I think, but you need to put a lot more work on this. It needs a chorus, a bridge/interlude, just more parts to the song in general. Also the quality needs to be improved by quite a bit.
You might have something here if you put some more work and effort into it, keep it up. :)
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ya i will update it soon so it does not hurt the ears
>:P
Well, this song had sorta a riff going on. NIce rhythm, too.
Suggestions: I really couldn't find any coherence in this track. Very unorganized. And the tune would flow kool for a bit then all of a sudden a bad chord would kick in an ruin the moment. Try again.
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