Reviews for The Rabbit and the Heart

[Trix]

At least you tried.

However, 'using my mouse' is not an legit excuse. There is alot of things 'wrong' here. The front legs look like they have been sawn together. The leg further away should be smaller then the one closer to the screen. If they are the exact same size they look like they are next to each other. The same thing goes for the backlegs. If it wasn't for that shading, the leg closer to the screen would look like it was behind the further away leg.

There are alot of other things to go into deep with. But still, you tried. And that makes you better then anyone that hasn't. There are good things about this as well! I have seen muuuch worse! I say, listen to the advice the others gave given you and keep on drawing. Good try! Hope to see you again! :)

EventHorizon responds:

as I told the others I'm not a good artist, you're right, in fact in this design there are many flaws but it took me all my will to create it, I hope to improve.

[J-qb]

Nice un

This might be the first pixelart flood pic... i dunno. Nice colors in this one.
The shading is a bit odd, especially on the bunny, unless thats supposed to be spots on his fur. Otherwise it looks as if the light is coming from below him.
On the sky; Id suggest flipping the gradient (and spacing it a bit more) since the sun is high; the sky would be lighter at the top. (at night, when the sun is below the horizon; the sky is darker at the top)

EventHorizon responds:

Thanks for the review, you're right about the shadows in fact I've done haphazardly, however I will try to improve :)

[LegolaSS]

using a mouse isn't an excuse

all my computer stuff i have done to date is with a mouse... some even in ms paint... i don't see why that would make your art any more worse... it just takes a bit more time and effort... theirs a lot of stuff wrong with this... I'm going to ignore the quality... right... the bunny seems to only have one front leg or two on the same side... the sky gradient it too harsh too quickly... adding more colors would have helped and also in some softer colors... the plant seems very odd in the blank landscape that seems very bumpy... might have smoothed some of the lines a bit more with the pen tool just to go back over bits to repair them... also might want to make the feet a bit larger as most seem to be flat...

if you really want to work on pixel art... make sure you got a good color pallet.. reading some of these comments below have great ideas to help improve... once you got your colors ready make sure you work in fine detail... don't bulk colors unless your going for a smooth clean design.. but as this stands its getting a tiny 2 for been part of the the flood... better luck next time

EventHorizon responds:

I found your review really useful!, you gave me lots of advice, next time I will try to improve, thanks.

[Savory]

Weird

it does kinda feel like those high class modernism paintings... but I don't really like those guys. Does have a strange appeal to it though. You should definitely spend some quality time on it though. Spend 2-3 hours just choosing color palettes and see what happens. Hopefully something good since color palette is very important to pixel art.

EventHorizon responds:

ok, I understand, thanks for the review!

[Fifty-50]

Good.

Although it's very simple, its all good. I have nothing to say about pixels since I'm no pixel artist, but personally I think it's okay. I advise you to us a different painting program next time.

EventHorizon responds:

thanks for the review and for the advice, I'm glad you liked my piece of art ;)