nice job
Very good graphics, but boring as hell.
You did the single most irritating thing ever done in flash: You had a credit screen before the movie that lasted much too long. Noody cares who made the film, who was in conjustion with the film, or any of that, until after the movie. Most people already noticed who submitted the movie when they clicked the link, and don't care about anything else. What makes it worse is when time is wasted animating poeple's names so they look all nice and special. Trust me, trust me, trust me: not a soul watching the movie gives half a shit.
Couple that with the fact that you chose a song that you had to WAIT to play out the action. It was more than a little irritating to know the song, and know that the next time something happened wouldn't be for another ten seconds down the line. This whole flash could have probably been cut in half and had the same effect. Next time just make things happen, and if the music doesn't "fit" then either let it not fit or just find something else.