there's better
It's a good piece of work, and you showed adept misuse of plot devices from the sequel to the game, but the anatomy of the characters and having Zelda wearing the wrong cloths subtracted from the experience, regardless of you're disclaimer of voice actress shortages. There's better animation out there and I think you can learn from them, so watch and absorb enough to improve your style.
have luck in the future
bloodatone91
Ps: use more related music in future ;)