I can understand the computer problems....
but yeah graphics weren't that good
sound was the best you could get it
notice a gave a ten on the violence you did a good job man.
Reviews for "Nikata - Revenge"
wallpaperman responds:
violence rulesiz, FireEXtinguisher
I don't know who won
I am going to assume that it was Nikata who won, because that would only be fitting in this type of movie. The graphics could use some work, and some better sounds would be nice too. I like the wailing wind sounds, those were pretty cool.
wallpaperman responds:
yeah, nikata won. the graphics are crap i know but nevermind. i get a problem when trying to import sounds into flash, some stupid problem, those were the only sounds I could get.
Don't give up
Hey there...I'll be brutally honest with you.
This isn't very good.
The drawings were too sketchy, the sounds were a little cheap (typical sounds from flaskkit)
And the voice acting was fake (done by you I guess)
The animations werent bad...not very good either.
Things to keep in mind for your next movies.
1) Clearer voice acting.
2) More animations (moving clouds, moving grass maybe, more fluid sword movements, etc)
3) Better drawings (always like when we see their faces, those were better)
4) more sounds (like when the guy fall down after being cut, there should be some sounds of him falling down)
But dude you're only 13 years old and you do this so Do me a favor and keep doing flash animations and practicing and you'll be damn good in a couple years.
PS : Don't be mean to those who are mean just ignore them, they are idiots so don't be like them.
Peace
wallpaperman responds:
thanks, moving clouds would improve it, yeah I like to work up the idiots :-P I looked for sounds of him falling down for like half an hour, and made some but they were all crap so I didn't bother. my next flash is called "demon slug from hell" if you wanna see it hahaha
errr
make the voices a little clearer and you got yourslef a 5/5 flash
wallpaperman responds:
hahahaha you give it a 4 just because of unclear voices when there was text anyway?
Ehh--
I'll admit this is the coolest flash I've seen today...but keep in mind the others have been blammed so...yeah.
To sum it up, it was just too slow and over exaggerated. I could not really hear some of the voices you threw in there. Nothing thrilling happened really. And the '2 years later' part was just a bit too slow to keep me interested.
What I didn't understand is how you put the two faces in there only once but then you don't see the faces anymore. They were just two unimportant shots! I would have cut them out if I were you, or during the establishing shot show their faces, you know?
And the last problem I spotted was the slice-shot. Too many slices. Way too many. 1 or 2 would be perfect...but it dragged.
Please don't take this as a badmouth review, I'm just critiqing it. I'd love to watch you in the future because I truly feel you can pull off some kickass stuff later. Go for it!
wallpaperman responds:
thanks, this review ruled