Needs more depth, something to hold your eye.
to expand on whythe00's comment: I think the problem is that in trying to do the rays of light (very very hard I understand) you lost the focus of your painting. A lack of color can be useful to draw attention but it didn't lead to anything. I am supportive of this though, because I think that you rely heavily on color in many of your other works to get the pop needed in an abstract way. This was a step in a good new direction, I think.
I understand what you are saying, I'll keep that in mind the next time. (btw the rays of light were simply done by putting Windex on scott towel whipping the paint off. So the white you see is the white of the canvas :)
it's okay
But I didn't really liked it.
Its skillfull but I can't help but feel that its not as good as your other works (on which I also reviewed).
Maybe its just too abstract and the colours are kinda light (yeah I guess that was on purpose but anyways).
Somehow I just don't feel much when looking at it...
Thanks for the review I really appreciate it! Yeah I wanted to make it abstract to get the feel of underwater waterscapes and use light colors to make it calm and peaceful (unlike my other artwork). Thank you for giving your opinion :)