far too much writing
was nicely done, but i got bored of reading and started pressing space merely to get to the next action bit...ive seen far worse though
far too much writing
was nicely done, but i got bored of reading and started pressing space merely to get to the next action bit...ive seen far worse though
thank you, like i sed, the dialogue is just to get into the story, the next episode will hopefully make up for this
its got potential
that and i like the soundtrack, and its not too shabby in other places either. its got a slight independance day feel which i dont mind cause that was a brilliant movie so if yours turns out anywhere near as good as that you've got my vote. can't wait for the next one though i will cause i'm working on my lack of patience.
thanks, I'll have it done as soon as possible, promise =D
nice
its pretty good but waaaay to much dialogue, less talk more fight.
And the next arrows were hard to click on, use an image insted of text.
thanks. The next arrows are only really there to tell you to move on. I did say to use the space bar to move on. I'm sure you can see that this being the first part, that i'm just slipping into the story, hence all the dialogue, and the end leaves the edge for the next one to be....well, just action =D I'm already working on it!