Beautiful, but lacking...
Some, if not the best animation I've seen on Newgrounds, and the element of discrete fantasy you used reminds me more of contemporary American or British novels and less of the trite, overexaggerated anime fantasy most people reveare.
However, a sense of conflict in the first episode is desirable, and the dialogue could use a bit o' polishing.
I look forward to the next one, but with animation this detailed, it might be a while.