Beautiful, but lacking...
Some, if not the best animation I've seen on Newgrounds, and the element of discrete fantasy you used reminds me more of contemporary American or British novels and less of the trite, overexaggerated anime fantasy most people reveare.
However, a sense of conflict in the first episode is desirable, and the dialogue could use a bit o' polishing.
I look forward to the next one, but with animation this detailed, it might be a while.
Nice, umm, yeh
OK! where are the cool characters? where's the action, the bad guys, the demons and monsters? you dont have to do it all in one chapter but c'mon this was kinda dry, but it looks like a start to something good.
Very good with a few exceptions
The art and music are indeed very good. My only problems with this is that the quality of the voice acting is a bit low and the plot is moving very slowly at this point.
Great at points, but..
Some of the points are extremely good. I.E, the music at the beginning, and "Parts" of the graphics. However, when the characters move, their heel touches the ground but their toes go about 10 inches in the air. Plus, the Meegan ( ? ) 's voice is barely audible. Sounds like when she was recording it, the microphone was about 5 feet away.
awesome
Damn man,you should draw the next part fast,i cant wait to see more!