hmm
first of all i gave your sound a 0 because i have no sound at so sry about that, i alos think you should try to make the preloader look more professinal and u should try harder at it the graphics werent too bad but u should try to make them a little smoother and also have better movement as the chars seemed very rigid, Neways not bad for a first go hopefully i will be seeing more soon
Well...
The fighting is pretty boring, the animation is ok in the VERY beginning, but goes downhill from there, the environments are boring, the story is non-existant, and the fact that you put "6 hours later" makes us know he's going to do something. Take away the six hours later and you would at least have gotten a 4.
Eh
Its was a good start I liked it a little,the charaters were good but it was some choppy and bad animation,work on that!
why.... why?
ok, you basically wasted my time... this is the WORST story EVER!!!! why did you even take the five minutes out of your day to make this peice of shit? also, why would you even associate your name with this shitty shitty flash...?
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barely any sound crappy fighting scene i dont even know why they are there fighting it made no sense... Xill~