i like it, but.........
it's not quite there yet!! i really like the way ur story developed so far, seems like u got the contents down. i really like that, u put thoughts into the story and not just filling it up with fighting and gore. the graphics, however, could use a lil more variation. for example, when the character was talking, could've put more various scenes in there like put between different pics of people laying in a pool of blood, showing parts of the dark creatures... there could also have been more people in the inn, like maybe show people walking around in the background or talking to each but the main guy is all alone and in deep thoughts. u know what i mean. the intro was also a bit too long... but all in all i really liked it, otherwise i would've have wrote this giant thing.