Well, I don't wanna critizize you.
But I thought it was pretty bad. Some scenes were funny, but others looked crappy. In the second scene where mario makes a jump to the finish, you made some mistakes. 1. Mario wasn;t on the platform correctly. 2. When Mario was making the jump, not all the objects were moving correctly. Others were humorous and funny. And just for trying, I'll still give you a 4.