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A few suggestions:
1) Use real voice actors.
2) Put more detail into the backgrounds.
3) Put a bit more time into writing a real script.
4) Music would be nice, many scenes got stale.
In the end it wasn't half bad, it just needed a bit more attention to detail in the art. Otherwise it has mad potential. If you'd like help shoot me an e-mail, I'm busy on my new project but can help in my spare time.
I've blammed some pretty crappy entries lately...
But this isn't one of them. Like soulscreme said, you have a bit of work to do, but there's a lot of potential here. Keep at it, practice some more, and when you've made a few revisions, post another one. I'd be thrilled if more entries were like this one, as opposed to random squiggles and other pieces of crap I've seen lately.
Good job.
Yo!
Im white you seem racist in the ending i hear crackas wtf?I listen to rap and it that was crap tha sucked badly i dont care if you have braces rap it out and fuck you if youre racist i liked youre flash i gave it a 3 the ending was funny shit
Hmmmm....Try making these into...
...Clocks. THis would work better and be greater as a Clock Crew film.
not bad
The joke is quite old, but still funny.
The clip was cool and is better than previous things ive seen from you!
keep it up!