Not Bad
Basically what ToxMan said. Keep making more!
Reviews for "Robot's Birthday"
V-O-R-T-E-X responds:
If this makes it and i can keep it on newgrounds...i promise to make an upgrade of it by perfecting it and spending more time on it... If it doesn't then I'll REALLY perfect it and try again. thank you.
Good first submission
You know, everyone starts somewhere. Audio inclusion was good, graphics were a bit dull, but then again, I'm not a graphic artist! Keep it up, I'm sure you'll pump out better stuff.
V-O-R-T-E-X responds:
I've practiced with a multiple of different drawing styles, and then just seemed really cool to me for some reason...
too simple for me, your flash even seems semi-poor!!!
Nice one...
That was pretty good.
V-O-R-T-E-X responds:
Thank you very much!
Why Flock?
I thought it was a cute concept, and all those robots chanting, "Go Robot, it's your birthday" made me chuckle. But why inflate the size of the Flash file--and jeopardize the legality of the project by infringing on the copyright of another artist--with the unauthorized use of the Flock of Seagulls song? The producer seems like a creative guy, so he could do some more of his original music at the end, too!
V-O-R-T-E-X responds:
well, at first it sounded really good with the credits, but overall it didn't go together that well. i plan on changing it to something I made soon.