hey dude
its me again lol. another nice song here.
I think you did a decent job with the drums. The beat was nothing amazing, but the song calls for a simple, laidback beat, which you arranged quite effectively. I didn't think the clap was a very fitting sample for the style and a snare (which you did indeed use in the second half) would be more suitable IMO. Also, when you picked up the pace of the hi-hats and made the beat seem more rushed, I didn't think it was really needed for the song, unless you were going to pick up the energy on the instruments and drastically change the course of the track. Oh, and good windchime percussion to in transitions. It's a good choice to take the crash cymbal's role.
The orchestration was carried out marvelously and sad emotions were well generated, I think it fits perfect with the title. I'm really digging the piano melodies once again, you really good with sequencing your chord progessions. Strings were well layered, and flow well in the background. Flute and the electric piano sounding instrument really help add to the mood too, and when the flute harmonizes it sounds kinda of relieving, as if someone has reached heaven. It also loops flawlessly, as I mistook the intro for the ending.
hey, ditch the FL keys. I can name three free piano sounds that will sound better off the top of my head, DSK Acoustic Keyz, 4Front Piano Module, Steinway soundfont, there's even some realistic sounding piano samples that you can load into Goldwave on blackhole12's blog (www.blackhoie12.newgrounds)
so good job here once again! the mixing could be done a tad better (mess with some panning, variating reverb levels and EQ-which I wish I could give more specific suggestions but I'm no good at this stuff) but overall this was a great piece.