awsm!!
i love the style of drawing u have done here, it looks real simple and original. its pretty funny and its quite cute when u think about it! keep it up
Reviews for "heaven. just a jump away"
dommi-fresh responds:
violence is pretty cute
Entertaining comic
~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute like a {COMIC} and i could totally see this in the sunday comic strip, but anyways you really put some good humor into this now i was looking at this and thought is Jesus telling him to jump to the other side, to save him, or is jesus telling him to jump in because he is not worth saving? lol just thought it was funny because you never know, allthough that may not have been your intent, now to improve on this maybe put more dead in the hole, maybe to make it even funnier you can have some one hangin the jesus side but jesus has yet to help him just another silly idea i thought, infact i wouldnt mind seeing this in a more comic like feel, you could really tell a tale with this one hehe, anyways just another crazy thought, but it was funny and i enjoyed what you presented us with.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe take it to a new level and add a comic like feel, with {FRAMES} also suggested a few wacky ideas for more humor above in review.
~X~
dommi-fresh responds:
wacky
Ya know,
I reckon he could make that too! Just needs a running start is all.
dommi-fresh responds:
yea it just needs a little dedication unfortunalty this lil character has none.