I like this one.
However, removing the pad in the outro does kill the mood and continuity. And better to have less of the snare offbeat, it distracts from the feeling a bit. Someone has already gave you these two advices though :P
A nice, chilling beat. Would fit for quite many things. I like the melody quite alot.
Great work. 9/10 and a five ( 4.32 / 5.00 (+ 0.020) ).
thanks .. im, thinking about taking all the advice and re-doing this track.. it does need work and id like it to be a complete loop so someone can use it fer flash
thanks fer the listen
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very good beat and overall good
yay!
nice :) this was a nice little loop to jst listen to and chill. though, the continuity of the song died when you removed the pad at the end, so the loop sounds a bit forced, and the offbeat drum loopage shouldn't loop so often--the offbeat snare is somethign that kind of throws u off, and i dont want it to keep happening every 4 bars haha.
i personally thin ka more mellow drum beat may have worked better, but this is good too heh. though if u modulated the bass drum a little bit, that may have been cool too.
yeah, those are my random suggestions. but at the end of the day, nice loop :D
and in turn, do as you say, and be fair, and check my stuf out: D [i skipped the first 2 since they really aren't original serious songs, you know? but hte zero bomb one, you went way too complicated! no noob would cut up a loop and rearrange it, and in some ways, the way u did that was pretty legit, TBH. slicing is an art...]
Good.
I really like this song. It's soft, yet captivating... Also, it loops very well. It took me a while before I even realized the song had looped.. lol. Would definitely work great as the background to a game. 5/5 9/10
sweet
Sweet little loop. Maybe the bassdrum is a little too loud, easy to turn down the volume though @ your software.