It Has Potential
I like the way you depict the characters, definitely showed high school awkwardness. Most of the jokes, however, aren't really landing--they're missing something. This flash had the potential to be funny, but somehow got lost in execution. But hey, it's your first one right?
So of course there's room to grow. That animation's not bad, so I'll check the next episode out.
not bad
cool twist still not that good
mixed
ok the animations kinda sucked but the ending was kinda nice.
Okay...
For being the first in a series, i cant rate it too harshly... The animation is old explaining the style of it i suspect... but some of it did get old... and you were just plain lazy in some parts of the flick...
a waist of time...
the only thing good is the ok sound quality(to tell you the truth i don't know if it is good or not because i didn't pay very much attention.)and the ok drawing( if its called drawing...)
But other than that it sucked.