Ho Hum...
I don't think that'd be all that helpful to someone who's new to the Zelda series. Your descriptions hardly fill in the story, besides a few very basic things. And it doesn't really say anything about gameplay or whatever else they might want to know about. And for someone who's already familiar with the games, it's kinda boring.
The graphics and style are... almost non-existant. It's just a black background, a screenshot, and some white writing.
The only thing I liked was the music, but it's not like you made it. All in all, the submission was below average, and there are people here who have put a lot more work into what they make. And the whole point of this submission - informing people who are new to Zelda, and entertaining those who aren't - well, you didn't accomplish that, either.