thta was great
i liked it umm youve got skills.ummthe only suggestion is add sound but it really didnt need it.
Reviews for "fight on birch hill"
It's deja vu all over again!
That was good! Not much of a story, though; maybe if you saw the monster kill the guy's family or something, and the sound, well, I understand. My favourite parts were [the two scenes] where the guy puts his sword back in its sheath, and when he steps back in the shadows and then lightning flashes on his face. My suggestions would just be sound and more story. Otherwise, graphics and storyboarding are good. Fiend. Oh yeah, and nice use of the motion guide!
Freshy-Q responds:
Well arent you miss preachy. I jest. Thanks for your imput, steph. O god... should i not have used you real name???
Um.... LOOK OVER THERE! A THREE HEADED MONKEY!!!! (heh heh god im smooth)
wow
for your first flash ever it was really good the animation wasnt too good but those where some reall good drawins
Freshy-Q responds:
Thanks. Im glad you didnt hate it. :P
ok, some things need to be changed
i like some of the scenes with just your hero standing there, he looks pretty slick, but all the things in his hair on that side view aren't that visually pleasing (he kinda loses his cool edge) the fighting should be a bit more graphically intense, i assume you were aiming at the flawless swordsmenship technique kinda thing, but red lines across the screen kind've flaw that up, do more widened lines, that go from narrow to wide in the center, one by one, then fade them out, then do the part where his body splits at an up close angle....hope that helps you out, thx for not makin a clock movie :) lol
Freshy-Q responds:
he he thanks.
not too bad
worth a look in but it isnt long enough and the hero looks really scruffy
but excellent start