Scarface, eh?
I actually watched Scarface last night for the first time. That is a great friggin movie. After seeing it, I made a decree that anyone who could pull off a Scarface reference with perfect grace in either a Flash movie, real life, or a response will earn my respect.
Unfortunately I dont think you caught the essence of Tony Montana nor Scarface. The volley of bullets does reflect the ending scene of Scarface very well, but there was hardly any coloring or reference to Scarface. Try for a more storyline approach and use lots 'n lots of more details.