Terrible
Wow, that was really terrible, you had the vocals coming out of one side and the backing from another, that unbalance makes it very hard to listen to, considering I use headphones too. I would strongly suggest keeping the whole thing balanced out at both sides, otherwise it just ends up sounding like a mess as well as being annoying. The background is okay and works with the vocals but as mentioned before, the unbalance makes it sound bad.
The lyrics are kind of funny, sadly though because of the way this is done, it's hard to pay attention to much of the lyrics, it was hard just listerning to this all the way. I really hope you fix that for future works, you might have a decent idea here but it didn't really come out too well.
1/5
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