To be honest.
I really didnt like this track and there is alot of reasons why.
1:i didnt really like how you got into the song so fast i mean you should of took your time had a nice little build up to it.
2:The melody was nice but you pretty used the same one through the whole track it got kinda boring and that goes with reason number 1 cause you start of with the main melody and ended with the main melody.
3:All the synths and bass were to to lud and it drowned out all you percussion which is a bad thing but percussion and the clearness of it is very important in tracks.
4:there wasnt much percussion anyways all i can hear is a kick and a snare,the kick should be changed or fix cause its abit to unhearble and got drowned out by your bass and you can really feel the kick and you need to feel.the snare was fine lol.
Thats about all i can find what needs fixing about this track and in my honest opion i dont think this track should be on the audio homepage cause ive been trying hard to get hard on there myself,and IM SORRY if thats mean and hurts your feeling but when it comes to reviewing for me i try to be as honest as i can and its nothing against you im only trying to help you out man.
Check out some of my music and leave a review if you want,cause i dont want you to think i hate you i just dont like this track.
Keep the work up you do have talent.
Peace