it was pretty good
i really like your characters, all pretty unique in their weird ways. the voices were decent and maybe you should try to shrink the sizes of the music. other than that your flash is one of the few have given me laughter... yay! and from what i saw i KNOW you can come up with better jokes so ill be waiting for the next one.
well thank you.
Eh, alright....
Maybe I'm just cynical, but this didn't seem like anything too new or special to me. To many other movies like this are out here. Tomorrow's Nobodies, Waterman, Erik the Juiceman, etc etc. The list goes on and on and on and on...
It's clear you've spent some time on it, but I think you should have spent more. The characters weren't all that well drawn/animated. The mouths seemed really half assed and all. Maybe that's just your style and all, but it just wreaks of laziness.
You need to work on your sound. Spend some extra time to normalize the voices so there's no sudden change in volume when different characters are speaking. You should also compress your music. There are like only a trillion tutorials out there, even one here on NG! Go read up on it. Maybe add a play button too at the end of the loading screen...
You also really gotta sit down and do something with it. What I mean is, there was no point to this series at all. Oh wowie! A King of the Hill parody! Yippie! Seriously. You could have done a lot more with what you have, but you wasted it on a stupid parody. And the first one wasn't all that great either. You need to do some work with it. Give them more intaraction, something to do. Give it a point, and do something to make people more interested. Sure, the KotH thing was kinda cute, but it just dragged on. And since it ended there, I really don't want to see any more of this series. Improve it some, and you could have one heck of a hit on your hands.
Well I will Honestly Respect your Review and comments. I know some stuff could be approved apon, and in the future it will be. Thanks
Great flash
But if you wanted us to watch the first part first, why didn't you submit it first?
i submitted it first because i had to make the link work at the end of ep 1(part 1) to properly link to part 2. But thanks for the review.
LOL
this is a ghetto/crazy blend of south park, sesame street, and king of the hill. uhh... just saw a sheep flyiing by. ok, where was i... oh it ended already? wow. i think u should've put a play button between the time when the movie finished loading and the movie starting. some people, esp those still stuck at 56K modem, would probably have walked away to get some snacks or read a tale of two city while this thing was loading.
not bad tho, i'm waiting to see what happens in ep 2.
thank you my good man. And ep 2 will have a way less file size. thanks!
O.K.
The characters looked cool, but they were a bit pixely and I didn't like how the lines wer so shaky. The concept is great. Just work on your graphics...
thanks