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Reviews for "lonelyness"

nice

i like the theme, the soundtrack. i liked the difference in styles between current tears / past loves. i like your pacing.
the only helpful tip i can offer is for your scene fades (nice work, btw) :if you make all of the symbols used to make an animated sequence into one symbol before you fade-in a scene it should fade more evenly and smoothly.
good effort. don't quit.
-beef

meh

kinda odd and a little to 'deep' but i still like it for some odd reason

How very Emo of you....

Other than that, you should work on your story-writing skills, coz you've got an interesting style and vision going, and it'd be great to see what you could do with a plot.

Not bad.

However, everytime the light faded out you could very clearly see the blocks around the images. You might want to fix that, it's part of the reason I didn't give it a better score.

E for effort

Not too bad! There was a bit of a plot in there, but a tad light on detail.