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Reviews for "lonelyness"

How very Emo of you....

Other than that, you should work on your story-writing skills, coz you've got an interesting style and vision going, and it'd be great to see what you could do with a plot.

hmm.

ok i think you wasted your time making that! two, not because your shit, because it had no point :s your style is very different, and the effects of the boy and room waving in and out...nice. use it and make something that makes sence and is much smaller in file size andull go far.

Needs some artistic improvement

First thing that I can say about this movie is that you need to make huge artistic progress. It looked terrible.
But there are still some good points in this and that's why I didn't blam it.
First of all, no violence or rude language or anything like that : that's good to see this from time to time. I'm a bit fed up of all these guys asking for more blood, more sex, more jokes in all the movies.
I also liked the music used for this movie. And the "story" was not bad neither.
Now, you know that you need to practice and I hope we will see some good movies coming from you.

nice

i like the theme, the soundtrack. i liked the difference in styles between current tears / past loves. i like your pacing.
the only helpful tip i can offer is for your scene fades (nice work, btw) :if you make all of the symbols used to make an animated sequence into one symbol before you fade-in a scene it should fade more evenly and smoothly.
good effort. don't quit.
-beef

Needs work..

It's good as a first flash. But i suggest to do more to the graphics. They are not so sharp and the background to characters need to dissapear also.

But keep trying