*Vomits a bit*
Not really good...sry man ur animation is good, ur drawing is good, but ur story sucks beyond comparison.
Im an anime fan and can usually tolerate any anime (ex. SaliorMoon, Hamtaro, Pokemon), but this didnt have any potential.
U should think about making something else cuz uve got skills but plz, for the sake of everyone on the planet Earth, ask someone else for a story.