haven't made a review in a long time but....
To tell the truth, I'm not entirely sure what to think. I'm pretty sure that I liked it...didn't I? It had a good sense of style; or rarther, it flowed togather well. I think the problem is in your setting, think of something different, more compelling to a viewers visual sense than "fight at bridge"(stick) Anyway, good luck at any future endevors, you should defintly keep trying.