Reviews for Metal Gear Kirby

[Chipichu]

needs work

I really want to like this because the style and the ideas are not bad but there is still a lot lacking.
Firstly, you really need a preloader. Though I have a fast connection I was still left staring at a blank screen while I wondered if it was loading correctly.
Secondly, it needs to be longer and have a smaller file size. One of the things that it most annoying to people who have watched a lot of flash animations is when an animation is huge but lasts less than a minute. File optimization is a very important skill and is what keeps long flashs like "Perfect Kirby" from being separated into 20 parts.
And lastly, not say "please don't BLAM". We all see that way to often on new stuff and if we didn't BLAM all the crap and first tries then we'd end up with a horrible NewGrounds, and no one wants that.
So please, experiment with flash, show your friends, but don't put something on NG until it's at least "3" material. The site's having trouble will all the crap that's on it right now.

[sylo]

you've posted this befor

now it's just longer, it's got potentail but you've got to optimise the sound and make it alot ALOT longer.

[JunkiemanLogan]

No

This is just a really bad Perfect Kirby ripoff. Come up with something more original.

[TWDarkflame]

sigh

you got skill in animation, why not try to be original?
I blamed it because of lack of originality.

[xxSHIFTxx]

what's the point ?

It's too short ! The file is too big ! The story is .. hum ... there is no story.

I didn't blamed it because it look like you worked on it, but there are bugs (imposibile to read the last text, put a STOP command oon your .fla)

Graphics are quite good, but the animation is bad. + it's hard to do after "perfect kirby" a movie staring kirby who don't look crapy ...

So keep working and good luck