Second ending is too long.
It wasn´t anymore so funny because it was so long.
Second ending is too long.
It wasn´t anymore so funny because it was so long.
meh
I can see you put effort into this but its nothing too spectacular. you could do better. the 2nd ending is proof. it was much better than the first.
more endings would have been cool. less profanity. (whats with your facination with the words "shit" and "fag" anyway?)
Hmmm...
Let's try less baby killing and more substance!