Reviews for CvsD [MotN Mix]v2

[HTID-Dreizehn]

Phenominal.

Your piece told me a story.

I caught a glimpse into the life of a young couple. They each love one another dearly and live together in a large metropolis somewhere. On this particular night however, it's raining steadily and they're both in their apartment having an argument over the sudden financial problems they're faced with. The girl is in a panic, and the boy is giving his best effort in trying to put her mind at ease, reassuring her that everything will work out. Additionally, in the back of his mind he feels the time is nearing to ask her the question.. the one which ties the knot between them.

The girl doesn't want to hear his attempts at comforting her anymore, and she asks him to be alone. The boy stands in awe of her request, his heart sinks at her words, and he turns to get his coat which he puts on as he exits the door. The girl curls up on the couch and puts her hand to her mouth, closing her eyes as they begin to water.

The boy exits the apartment building where they live and begins his solemn walk in the rain, the coat he wears barely offering any kind of relief from the weather. He doesn't look upward as his clothes begin to soak and weigh him down, he stares downward, sorting out the thoughts in his mind. He can understand her worry, and he understands she needs the time to herself. His heart is revitalized when he thinks of her in a wedding dress, and he smiles as he paces forward.

In the apartment, the girl wipes her eye and bites her lip when she replays her response to his actions in her mind. She feels terrible and comes to the epiphany that he followed her wish out of what he feels for her, love. She replays different occurrences from their time together, where the normal man would discard the relationship for another. She then remembers how the boy would react.. he would return. She quickly runs to the window to look out upon the city, then down below at the sidewalk to witness her love coming back to her, and she smiles.

The boy stops in his tracks when he feels a sudden warmth. He looks upward at the building, and sees the silhouette of the girl he loves. He know the time is right to ask.

10/10, 5/5, and downloaded. Thank you.

[nollen]

good

Its a little bit quiet for my tastes, but I couldn't dream of doing anything as good as this, so i'll give it a ten. Maybe put it under ambient next time.

To the person below me, who cares if it repeats itself? All good songs repeat themselves. And it shouldn't matter as long as the song is good.

[Dimolecular]

Great, but repeats itself too much

It sounds like two minutes of the melody is pretty much just the same five second-beat played of 25 times, making the melody quite boring after a short while. It would sure have done great in a mini-game, but as a melody alone, it is not that exciting. I did sort of like the beat, though, so a 5/10 it will be.

Mid-Night responds:

the "main melody" is only played 4 times in the song, once when it's fading in at the beginning, and then when it fades in again, and then it repeats twice. Actually pay attention and you might realize this. the only part that repeats itself is the part directly after the beginning, and it's only for a few bars.

Thanks,
Fuck off.

[Kman08]

Great!

This is just great, i don't know what else there is to say about it. It makes a change from the others I have heard recently, there is no hard bass in it, just soft all the way through.

[deterodae]

indeed

Perfect, amazing, terrific, stupendous, you master of music, you God among men, you Adonis of musical notes, you transient being, you creator of the heavens and earth, the Alpha and the Omega, the destroy of worlds, you monkey with a brass pole, you hurricane of blessed talent, you midget with a thousand beards, you grasshopper with granite legs, you multicolored orange, you radical dude!

What a spiffy piece you've got there.