improvement
much better then before, this time it isn't just 17 sylabol sentences with return cases.
the humor was better to, keep it up but i don't know if you should do another haiku again.
Reviews for "Haikus II"
goatasaur responds:
I am done for now,
with haikus. I enjoy them,
but don't want burn-out.
!!!
the one with the cat in the hat background didnt work, the 2nd line was just 6...by the way, that was boring...
goatasaur responds:
You have miscounted.
Check the film. There are seven.
Thanks for your input.
Beeeeutiful.
Totally kicks ass.
I would have done one just like this,
but I suck at Flash.
goatasaur responds:
It takes some effort.
But in the end it pays off,
even for no pay.
i dont care what those other bitches say
hey nice Work really
the only thing i would look for is to tweak your frame rate a bit on a couple segments okay maybee just one but yeah (my aura is evil but i cant help it) jesus this is what i needed just got finished with an essay, i needed an enlightening smirk in my day. i respect haikus alot half of why i gave you ten on shit you didnt have ex. violence. finaly i love that track i love it that the author of that song sux though so im not going to give em any publicity because he riped that song off of somewere and added his gay little MIDI back round (really he did). but i like the song yeah
Great jorb.
ps. rate that authors work zero on all his stuff at the audio portal
goatasaur responds:
Twenty FPS.
I think it looks pretty good.
Are you on a Mac?
The Macintosh Computer Hater Says....
For Hi-kuu (or whatever), it was actually pretty good, but the punch line is when you read the lines and count out the syllables (or whatever. I'm drunk, forgive me). 17, every time, and that's what makes this a keeper.
i little more visual effects would've been more encapsulating, but it's pretty got, otherwise. I liked it.
goatasaur responds:
Razzle-dazzle, Mac,
would detract from the simple
elegant lyric.