Err....
Are you sure thats you on guitar? Because it sounds A LOT like the guitar midi in FL Studio...
Other than that, i liked the composition, i would use different sounds though so that the melody would come out, and perhaps alternate instruments with respect to the melody.
The drums are ok, they do the job.
It does get a little repetitive which leads to some "boring" moments.
It has a lot of potential, so keep working on it.
~WOLF~
One part is is guitar midi, but other part is me on guitar. :)
I know this sounds are not so different, but i hadn't sounds other then FL has. :)
Thanks for the review and advices. I'm realy glad you took your time and wrote it.
nice
its very good and has been put together well, it sounds like a birthday massacre song but with no singing. i think thats what its missing but overall its a good submission
Thanks. I'll try to sing.
EPIC!!!
lol Its sounds like the last boss of a final fantasy game or some kind of rpg, which of course, means it's awesome. Cool Song Dude!
The boss in final fantasy? May be. :]
PROGRESSIVE!!!!!
i like it... sounds nice but i believe people now are getting really mixed up on what is "goth" and what is "progressive"
Yeah... But I can't change it now. :(
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yah its pretty asome dude 9/10