buggy but good
Okay, I was all hyped for this game after reading through your awesome AS thread, so I had extremely high hopes... The first thing I noticed when I started the game was the poor grammar and spelling. Now, I can forgive that since English isn't your first language (your English is a lot better than my Dutch), but I'm sure you must know someone who could fix it up to look like a native speaker wrote it. If nothing else, it'd make the game seem more polished. So after reading the instructions, I clicked on the button to go back to the main menu. I noticed that the music from the Instructions menu was still playing, meaning the instructions music and the main menu music were playing at the same time. I figured "Okay, so there's one little bug. That's fine." and clicked on the Play button. I was quickly rushed through what I assume were the opening instructions, but was unable to read them because they were up for maybe a 5th of a second. At this point, I'm starting to get worried. I didn't encounter any more problems until I tried working at the "Buisness". I was a bit annoyed because there was no transition screen after I clicked the work button, but what really annoyed me was the lack of any message at all when I clicked the "Try for a promotion" button. Then at the bar fight, the guy wasnt fighting back. At this point, I stopped playing.
Anyway, I'm not trying to be mean, I just want to point out a few of the errors so that you can fix them. I generally enjoy this style of game, so I hope that you can do better. ^_^