Powerful
Wonderful work. The layering is fantastic and progression is right on. I really like how you stress the story that is told through your music. Such emotion and message I usually can only find it classical. Very impressive work.
I personally would love for the tract to be longer, but more than anything else, keep it good at any length. this is great at its current length; if you can, give us a longer story please. (If you want an example of what I really think is a wonderful but longer and still emotional track, check out "Uncharted Continent" by S. Zeilenga off of his In Medias Res album)