hmm
As a flash its very good. However maybe its the fact you said the movie isnt serious a lot of people dont like it. The only thing you can make a flash like this is a way to show how wrong this is. Its not entertaining even if you didnt mean to hurt anyone. Dont use things you obiously know will upset people or youll just get a lot of bad reviews. Maybe you should have put some phone numbers for victims of domestic violence. Use your skill to make an enjoyable movie not something that will hurt other people unless you take it VERY seriously in the way you present the story. Not just some guy stabbing his gf.