Reviews for Sticks in Reality 2

[crazeyal]

Not bad

But you need to work on your director's skills. Especially with a movie file, you have too many scenes with serious amounts of wasted moments. Seing 5 seconds of someone's back is a BIG deal in an actual movie, it's pretty deadly in a situation like this.

You need to speed things up. The computer scene needed .5 seconds of sitting down, maybe a closeup of the computer, or searching throught the HD. The scene where the stick "surprised" you on the staircase? The viewer should either be surprised as well, or anticipating something.

keep working on it.

Asvegren responds:

point taken

[TheInfamousTM]

A fun and interesting stick death!

Sticks in reality, eh? Not bad movie making here! I don't think an approach like this has been taken before, mixing real life film with this.

Though due to the file size, and usage of film in this manner, I wonder if flash was the best medium for your movie. It probably would be smaller as a DivX/XviD AVI.

Of course, they don't accept movies like that on Newgrounds, but anyway... it's just musing.

Good movie! Keep at it!

[Taors]

That was great!

You should seriously think about becoming a director, I loved those camera angles.

[FrozenJoker]

nice idea,but it isnt yours

just to let everybody know,this idea is from Ryan Noraptor (Ryan versus Sticks) but i still like it.

Asvegren responds:

He may be the first to do something like this (although I doubt it) but I have never seen any of his movies.

[gamejunkie]

GREAT CONCEPT

interacting sticks with the real world is a cool concept

but the film was a little dark in spots,(hard to see whats going on), and the music got on my nerves eventually.

room for improvement, so experiment some more and i bet the next one will be great.