Eh..
Well I hate to hold you to such a high standard but as far as stick figure martial arts go, Xiao Xiao is still the best and you havnt done much to improve opun it exept in the way of backgrounds, and although backgrounds can add atmosphere the key element is the martial arts itself and the motions were just a bit too jerky and unatural looking to be really engrossing.
Keep trying. Xiao Xiao is the highest standard in stick-figure combat, anything short of it seems to pale in comparison, despite how good it would be on its own.