To slow
The movie is way to slow you should higher the frame rate because now you are looking at one picture for about 30s and that is way to long
To slow
The movie is way to slow you should higher the frame rate because now you are looking at one picture for about 30s and that is way to long
lacking
Yes, the graphics were alright...what I didn't unerstand was those puffs of white that were always around his wrists, were those supposed to be his hands? it wasn't very funny, cept for the raccoon. The guy just seemed like a fucktard. Yet he manages to build himself a boat? I know it doesn't have to make sense, it's a cartoon, blah blah blah. I might sound like a whiny bitch, w/e, I thought it was lacking. and the sound...where's the sound??!
mixed
good art
no sound
looooooooong stretches of time
You already know
too lengthy. You should have added more sounds. I think that would have helped your score. The bit about opening the door was too long, and not even really funny. And there were too many awkward moments. The squirrel thing was a little funny though. anyways, I say take it off newgrounds. Work on it a bit more, and then re-submit. The longer you take, the better it will be.
P.S. it won't take that long anyways.
Dont make any more....
You took something what sounded promesing and turned it into pleh...