Confused indeed.
How was it inspired by Arfen House nad FLCL? Also, it needs to be longer, and your timing with the voice/mount movements was off. But for what little you did, you did show you can make flash so I give you a 4/5 8/10. Nice work.
Reviews for "Akai~no~Shiroi"
was okay
nice effort
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Hmpf, Its alright I guess..
what do you need help with the sound with?
what do you need, to make the sound go with their mouths? thats easy and just tinkey with where the frames are
Not bad, just one point of advice...
Other people can tell you how to synch up their mouths with the spoken words. My advice? Be sure you proofread all the printed and written words you intend to put up. When the first thing someone sees of your film is a typo like "Persenting" (try "Presenting" next time), it lowers their opinion of your work and, by association, you.
~Burkemun