Great
but il hav 2blam it.
way 2short. make the finished version. it shud b good if it follows this...
Reviews for "Monday (demo - fixed)"
graphikreative responds:
Yeah that's cool. It was just for feedback. I don't care about my score. That's not why I'm here.
Pretty good
Would be interesting to see a full game. With the action scripting, I would say just learn it, or ask on the forums for how to do certain things, or check out flashkit for tutorials. Its always more satisfying when you make a movie all on your own.
1 more thing, if you click "Maybe I should just quit", there doesn't seem to be a button to restart. Other than that its quite cool, nice music as well, a bit twilight zone-esq. Cant wait to see the full version.
cool for a demo
some of the text could be a bit bigger but other than that great
graphikreative responds:
Admittedly, I'm a dumbass. I didn't realize Dynamic text in flash would only appear if you had the actual font, therefore those ridiculous sizes you're all seeing are not what I was seeing. I humbly apologize for the inconvenience. I tried to read it myself now and it's insane. Oops.
Neato
cool graphics. keep the size that way it is.
Just how long did it take you to make this?
graphikreative responds:
I'm not sure. Probably somewhere between 3 and 5 hours.
I really like the style of this game...
It's not the flashiest, most dazzling artwork I've ever seen, but you have a unique style that I find interesting. This could be a really promising "choose your story" game with a little work. I'm looking forward to seeing more.