cool for a demo
some of the text could be a bit bigger but other than that great
Reviews for "Monday (demo - fixed)"
graphikreative responds:
Admittedly, I'm a dumbass. I didn't realize Dynamic text in flash would only appear if you had the actual font, therefore those ridiculous sizes you're all seeing are not what I was seeing. I humbly apologize for the inconvenience. I tried to read it myself now and it's insane. Oops.
hmm.....
if you want an actionscripter or whatever, you should probably console the guys who made other great games... like... maybe frankies adventure guy or one of those guys.
Hope you succeed, i'll be looking forward for the real game. =)
graphikreative responds:
Thank you, Zebra. I am too.
Great
but il hav 2blam it.
way 2short. make the finished version. it shud b good if it follows this...
graphikreative responds:
Yeah that's cool. It was just for feedback. I don't care about my score. That's not why I'm here.
Pretty good
Would be interesting to see a full game. With the action scripting, I would say just learn it, or ask on the forums for how to do certain things, or check out flashkit for tutorials. Its always more satisfying when you make a movie all on your own.
1 more thing, if you click "Maybe I should just quit", there doesn't seem to be a button to restart. Other than that its quite cool, nice music as well, a bit twilight zone-esq. Cant wait to see the full version.
It's a good start for a demo
I like the moody plot that is presented. The music fits well. The text is improved, but some parts are still too small.
P.S. You can always just right click-zoom in if need be.