that was OK...
but cant you think of some better story lines???
i mean, so far youve done: going to the store, and looking for a TV. well whoopdey freeken DOO!!
im not saying its a crap series, but it could do with some touch ups...
oh, and i think you now SHOULD go get 5 bux and buy a mic. coz those voices are startin to piss EVERONE off! hahaha (or should i say: "el oh el oh el?") lol.