pretty good
good job
Reviews for "Angel B. Dean 01 part 1"
great style
but not enough animation or sound/music, i think its got a good story though
Exuse my ignorance...
That was a very wierd flash. Graphics were ok, but they are all too wierd, It looks like you have you have used too many different styles. Maybe this is your style, that's cool. I just didn't like it. The head character for exemple was black and white and the police had colors in their faces. Was this intentional? The main character BTW looked like you had used a reference from a picture of Roy Orbison ;). When the main character walks, also, it looks really bad. Maybe choose another angle, it doesnt look like he's walking at all. The cops' looked relly strange. Is it just me or why do I get the feeling you used a reference here to? well they where original atleast.
Some words of advice: I think you could make your backrounds in whatever other application you want, but when you use characters, they really look stale if you simply import them. Make these and add movements, make them acctually TALK with lipsynching and make the thing more filled with action.
I didn't really get the story, that is mostly I'm sorry, becuase it was so friggen boring.
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just graphics
wtf?!
I don't want to be rude or something, but it sucks! try to synchronise.