this song made me cry a little...
cuz the girl of my dreams i lost only about a year ago due to a freak accident (cries)
Reviews for "Our Love Forever"
Reminds me of the best night of my life =] Story!
We're sitting on the dock, he and I, and watching the night pass silently around us. The waves lap gently at the beach and peace is almost palpable in the air. Content, I lean heavily against him and smile up at his grinning visage. For half an hour, we talk about dreams, hopes, aspirations, what we want to do with our lives, what we want for ourselves. Finally, he turns to me and I want to cry, the emotions there are so easily read. Love. I love you, his hazel eyes say. I love you so much. Stay with me, here, all night, every night.
"If I could," he murmurs, brushing away a stray strand of hair from my face, fingers warm against my icy cheek. "I would give you all the stars in heaven, if it made you happy." My lips quirk and twitch and I can feel a sweet smile stretching across my face, even as I try to avoid getting too sentimental. I lean forward until our foreheads are pressed together, and we can see into each other's eyes. His are crinkled at the corners, a sure indication of the beautific grin on his face. I can feel myself swoon. /You're so beautiful./ I want to say, knowing that he would balk at the word "beautiful." But to me, he's wondrous, amazing, spectacular, glorious, and I don't want to leave this moment.
"I won't ever need the stars, if you're here with me." I say. I can see how the light of the moon fractures and splits apart to glow in those hazel orbs, to light up his face in a dazzling array of emotions. Suddenly, he tilts his head and our lips are pressed together. My eyes flutter closed. This is what I had been waiting for: something to call my own, something to remember later on when things were perhaps not so good as they were now.
"I love you." He whispers against my mouth; I'm so sensitive at the feel of his lips brushing against me that way that I move forward and kiss him again.
Some time later, when the words are spent and kisses have told their story (and parents have caught on to what we are doing), we walk hand-in-hand towards the car. The air is chilly around us, but it feels so amazing. Just before we reach the edge of being seen, he pushes me lightly against the wall of the house and we sneak a kiss, giggling like school children afterwards for being cliche enough to steal one more kiss in the moonlight.
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Story time is over =D I hope you liked it; it's really a true story, although I hate to admit that he and I didn't work out. But part of me likes to believe, in some alternate universe, we're still sitting on that dock, together and not caring about the rest of the world. Still holding hands and whispering words of love and sneaking a few kisses here and there.
Your music brings out such emotion in me. I hadn't realized I missed him... until I heard this song. =] Thank you for the realization, and I hope to listen to more of your music.
amazing
It's such a beautiful song with an even more beautiful message behind it. The song itself is an amazing piece of work but due to my connection with a loved one this speaks to me in ways unimaginable to someone who's never been in love.
Some people wouldn't believe it but I'm 15 years old and in love with a girl, I would do anything for her and we have such a deep connection beyond what many adults could ever find or feel. Sorry I don't mean to rant about loving her, this song just really opens my heart.
Good piece
Good piece, lovely tune. Need to be abit subtle on the EQ I reckon, many levels are through the roof right now.
It can't lead me back...
But it gives me hope for the future. One of the greatest desires of my heart right now is that I WILL find that second half of my soul, the one that I know I will spend the rest of my life with. I don't have any dating experience (one of those fat loser geeky types you know :P ) but the hope (and fear) is still there, and I just hope I have the chance to feel the way you did when you wrote this song. It would bring me joy greater than anything I will have ever known (I would think at least)