it was ok
But you should add some blood.
Reviews for "Stizick Fight"
It's not that bad
I bet you could do better though. The animation on this was real good. I liked the fighting scenes. But, if this gets blammed maybe you should try working on it a little more. I can't decide were to start on this though? The stick figures were good,so was the backround. Maybe you should try music.
GR67 responds:
ya music.
thanks for the comments on the animation
That is a nice film..
It was a neat film...Such a shame though, it is super short. Needs a bit of music...
GR67 responds:
ya i was trying to find a song but i dont have a size editor so if you know of one please tell
dude fix it then submit it
I have seen this alreayd. your animation is choppy and it's a poor attempt at xiao xiao. I am reviewing it because i believe youcan do much better.
GR67 responds:
ok i will increase the fps. thanks for the review
Not that bad
Ok, this is what I suggest: kick up the fps to about 20 or if it's already that high just make it higher because it was a little slow. Then, put a box or something around your text so we can see it better. Next, add some blood or something to give it more color. The guy's heads should be flying off and stuff instead of the guys just falling down. Last, make your replay button cooler. After you've done all this it should kick ass.
GR67 responds:
ok great help thanks a lot.
i had the fps at 18 so i will bump it up