nice
yodamanjaro is right about the beginning u should change it but other than that its still i kick ass song
Reviews for ""Alone" - F-777"
F-777 responds:
Thanks for the awesome review ill see what i can come up with.
hmm...
It' s very nice, but I can see that you could mess with this song more. But, you are getting that CD done, so you don't have to make this one more amazing than it already is . :)
The beginning kinda didn't fit with the rest of the song, or so it sounds to me. The groove you get into at around 1:00 is nice and feels good, but one of your synths sounds off with the rest of the song. It's like, its delay or something, kinda turns me off if you know what i mean.
Nice little FX at the end. Kinda like the ocean breeze. That could be a more fitting name, i think. "Alone" is a good title, but unless that's how you are feeling right now, "Ocean Breeze" would be a great fitting title.
Just making some suggestions here.
Also, just to say on here, i'm too lazy to give you a PM, but i just was told that i'm accepted to join another record label. So now, i've got two labels: 1 w/ dannyNergy and the new one is just me! w00t! It looks pretty promising I think. I still gotta look at the contract and stuff, but looks legit.
Keep making music, man! ...I wish I would find my groove. I'm still experimenting. I just realized that some artists are so good at making one certain kinda music, and yours is dance/techno. More dance, though. Some trance, mostly dance. I meant not to rhyme, I don't do it all the time. lol
Well, I'm gonna go eat a roflburger while wearing my lollerskates.
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Now, just to wrap this review up:
1. Change/edit the beginning (if you want, don't have to) to where it fits the rest of the song.
2. change the title to "Ocean Breeze" or something like that.
3. Put that FX in the beginning maybe (just a slight suggestion)...
4. umm...make it more amazing. put taht F-777-ness into it.
5. That one synth sounds out of sync. i hope you know what i'm talking about, it kinda started to bother me, but that's just my taste.
6. make the bassline more interesting than just offbeat bass notes....don't have a suggestion there, just is an idea to put in your head.
Well, I hope this helps you, or I would feel like a jerk now for talking about this song. I've listened to it 3 times by now...lol
ok, keep it chillin.
Derrick
9/10
5/5
F-777 responds:
Thanks man! Ya this isn't one of my best at all...this was just a quick 2 hours spent on this =P. Thanks for the awesome super long review!!!
WOW!!!
You are so good at this!!
*mumbles sumthing*
uh....wow that tranced me out...which is a good thing*shakes my head fericely* much better..really smooth sound ^-^
Alright!
Definitely epic my friend.