needs some work...
but is otherwise on the way to being an interesting drawing.
however the whole unfinished concept seems to be taken a little incorrectly if you ask me, if the story behind said character is that she is not completely built make it look like it, just making the piece look unfinished does not make it any deeper at all, it just makes the drawing ugly and makes you look lazy. if I were a group moderator I wouldn't accept it in the stage it is currently in anyway.
If I may make a suggestion, I think that by making her left and face arm actually look more mechanical and less finished then yeah, it would definitely look a lot better. hell this would absolutely splendid if colored, tell me if you actually get around to doing that I would like to see that.